WEEK 6

Good Morning!

So this week we'll be doing at least two things: writing the comparison essay, and looking at the next essay form: the film/book review. Some of you are even doing final drafts of the narrative essay. That's a lot of writing. Oh, and there's a little Strunk and White too. 

Pace yourselves. Home schoolers are especially good at that, right?

1. Due to computer issues (I was up north this weekend), I was unable to get work graded. I will get it done some time Monday. When I do, you can revise your narrative essay (final draft). 

Read my comments carefully. And when you think you're all done and you're ready to turn it in, proofread it one more time. 

2. Begin the comparison essay (first draft).

Some reminders...

The choices you make need to involve a legitimate choice. In other words, it needs to be something that reasonable people probably think hard about often. Pepsi vs. Coke is not good comparison essay material. No one really thinks about that, despite what the commercials say. Whether a football kicker should go with soccer or football cleats is better. Whether a 20 gauge or 12 gauge is the better load for a shotgun is better. 

Write a draft of 600+ words, carefully proofed, in one of the two outline forms -- alternating or opposing -- and no deviating from this format! YES, this is a highly prescriptive essay. NO, you don't have the freedom to organize it however you want. We're becoming disciplined writers.

3. The book or film review (no essay draft yet, just pre-writing). 

Read this book review. Notice it MAKES A JUDGMENT on the book. That's key. Your job will be to critique a book or film and make a recommendation to your reader (yes, no, or a qualified yes or no). Summarize the Opening Moves review in one paragraph.

Read this film review.  It's a little heavy on re-telling of the plot (something we'll need to avoid), but it's well-written and does the job of critiquing. And this one. It's a good example of a "qualified" yes. What do the two film reviews have in common? One paragraph, please. 

Before you get your wheels turning too fast, I'll let you know now that there are some off-limits subjects: Your book or film may NOT be on anything Tolkien, Rowling, Collins (Hunger Games), or Lucas related. It may not feature aliens or superheroes (sorry, Marvel and DC fans. You'll need to stretch beyond your comfort zone). The rest of the literary world is open for your enjoyment! 

4. LBGB...

1. Read chapter 4, "The Clause."

2. Define the following:

a. clause

b. simple sentence

c. independent clause

d. dependent clause

e. the complex sentence

f. the compound sentence

g. the compound-complex sentence 

3. Choose one from the four "Avoid" items and explain how it might improve your writing. 50+ words.

4. Explain the problems in these usage items (how do people tend to mess them up?) and their correct usage:

a. who / whom

b. literally

c. choose one

  

Turn everything in by 5:00 Friday. 

Have a great week!